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To Dad - Persuasive Essay - The Ipod.

Dear Dad,
I thought you this would make more sense then me telling it to you face to face.
Here is my persuasive essay:
The family is proposing to give Andy’s iPod to Makenna after she left hers at a soccer game. I think we shouldn’t give the iPod to Makenna. Two reasons that support my opinion are she wouldn’t use all its features and she may lose it again.

We shouldn’t give the iPod to Makenna for many reasons. First, she wouldn’t use all its features. Makenna would mostly use the iPod for Facebook. Second, I would use it more frequently. The camera would be used a lot. Also it is easier to take pictures than having to turn your phone around and risking not getting a good picture. Third, she may lose it again. So I believe she should have the appliance with less value. In conclusion, I feel we should not give the iPod to Makenna.

Even though I think makenna doesn’t deserve the iPod, many would disagree. (Dad) First I would be getting more “money.” Recently I got a new phone, so I would just be getting more. Second, my iPod that I have now works perfectly fine. Even though my iPod has cracks in it, it still functions like it’s required to. Last, I haven’t been the nicest person lately. The iPod should be rewarded to someone who earns/ deserves it. Again, even though I think makenna doesn’t deserve the iPod many would disagree.

Once again, I must emphasize how important it is that you reconsider who the iPod goes to. For example I would use it more frequently and I will have the responsibility to not lose it.



-Riley




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